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A House of Red

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A drop of crimson
Trickles down the wall.
The paint is peeling
In a house built of blood.
Doorways lead to ruby rooms,
Each one filled with scarlet skulls.

The heat is stifling
As you enter this house.
A trembling thought
Says to stay away.
But you press on through smoke,
Through sulphurous fumes,
And find yourself standing
By a great iron oven.

This strikes you as odd,
But you don't know why.

You open the oven
(It is warm to the touch),
And inside you find a ring.
You pick it up;
You turn it over
In your clumsy hands.

It is gold,
Or something like it,
Forged in flame for fingers.
You choose to wear it.
You will wish you hadn't.

A baby screams in another room,
And you swiftly rush to help it.
When you throw this door wide,
You see an empty chamber
(Save for skulls).
No baby was screaming.
Not yet. Not yet.
An echo of something
That is yet to come.

You know if you never see this baby,
The blood will never flow.

You return to the kitchen,
And find a knife.
You raise it toward the light,
And watch the metal gleam.
You have no idea
What else to use it for.

A drop of crimson
Trickles down the wall.
You look around in confusion.
Someone is sitting
Alone at a table.

A child looks back at you
From over her shoulder.

Your lips part to speak,
But you don't know what to say.
The child won't stop staring.
You stumble away
In search of an exit,
But you trip upon a toy.
A toy soldier--a man.

The silent child
Rises from her seat,
And picks her toy up gently.
As you struggle to your feet,
The floor begins to shake.

The child stares, and whispers a word.
You can't hear her. That one little word.
The most important word
You could ever hear.

You run away, still holding your knife,
As the house collapses behind you.
A short distance off,
You turn around,
And see that mound of red.

A toy soldier.
A little girl.
A knife. A ring.
And a house of red.
A poem full of symbols...sorry it's so long.
© 2013 - 2024 StarlightShoals
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MGS428's avatar
I really enjoyed the metaphorical value of this piece. There are two stages I take to reading every poem: 1. I simply read it as it is and feel the flow and beauty of it as I embrace the symbolism in relation to my own emotions and common emotional "landmarks" that a lot of people share. 2. Only after step 1 (a poem was not meant to simply be studied in a scholarly fashion; if it was then it would lack that open-ended beauty every good poem possesses) I dissect the poem and try to understand the composer's symbolism and emotion and meaning through the writing, while I probe for a deeper value that may have not even been intended when written. That's the beauty of it; words are infinite in value. After thorough examination of this piece using my method I have come to a conclusion... this is one kick-ass poem. Sorry for being blunt there, but your skill in symbolism is really portrayed very well here... definitely one I won't forget :) wow sorry if this message like put you to sleep lol